November Rain

 

 

Now…

Cold windy gusts

Short rainy bursts

 

Under the full moon

While the blackbird croons

 

And…

 

Your hand in mine

In a night this fine

 

While…

 

The corners of your mouth

Flourish that exquisite pout

 

And the cerulean eyes

Promise neither malice nor lies

 

But love, love and love alone

As endless as the blue horizon

 

And thus...

 

I find myself kissing you again

.

.

.

Drenched in this November rain

 

Reviews

[Prashanth Ashok]

CHarming :)

[Mockingbird]

this is a poem about not caring about who will see them. they just want to enjoy each other's company for as long as they could. even if it means getting soaked in the november rain. great piece.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Wow, this is beautiful! I love your presentation, too.

[An owl on the moon]

I love the fragments of thought that travel over time to this unique place of your loves unfolding... there in that rain, filled with a passion for what was and what is to come... Beautifully voiced!

[reflectingus]

Aww, this is so romantic! Especially the last part. The poetry is also amazing. Great job! :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This was a wonderful dream.
The only bad thing about this poem is that it ended.

[jhumur]

this is something.. beautiful.. !