Sun like love

 

Far from the crowd, and the jazz

Is a place where lonely hearts write

Writhe, wrench and wring their emotions

Navigating through the labyrinth of life

 

Far from the music, and the strobe lights

Is a place where only truth exists

Fighting, lighting and biting the world

By the purity of its massive blitz

 

Far from your place, and mine

Runs the boulevard of our shared dreams

Shouting, sensing, and striving for joy

Sending raptures of bliss in the breeze

 

And to that place I’ll take you, my queen

Whispering, in your ears, of my love within

And should you choose to come with me

Into the arms of the cosmos shall our love twine

 

Author's Note

After a long time folks. Unedited, unplanned and written in one shot. See what you make of it.

Reviews

[jhumur]

emotions and dreams are always so tempting no sid.we keep on dreaming,writing,illuring.. loved the words,the flow,there is a magic!!

p.s- the queen is just imaginary or someone like "maaya" ??

[An owl on the moon]

Always thrilled to read your words... here reaching for that place so distant from the noise and pain of life... and in your gracious heart you hold out your hand to your love, wanting to share such beauty with her always and ever. So lifting!

[Mockingbird]

beautifully written poem. if this was just spontaneous and written in one shot, then you are a very talented poet. great job.

[kink]

cant help but comment...:) awesome lines real piece of work !!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

beautiful set up for the heart's crescendo~adoration delicately honed through the lines that bring it to its lush home~

[Hotwater]

That's a lovely poem... and strait off the bat too!... good on yer!
*bird*

[AmandaN]

Ah love the imagery in this,great form too.thanks

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Far from your place, and mine
Runs the boulevard of our shared dreams
Shouting, sensing, and striving for joy
Sending raptures of bliss in the breeze
....................good lines, I like your writing. Keep it. With regards.

[Moriarty]

Woah!!! u're like wine...u just keep getting better and better...love this piece...what a swell of emotions!!! btw who is that lucky gal ;)