Tell A Hazel Tale

A pair of hazel eyes in a vista of green
Make the mirror crack in sweet delight
How they encompass the world within
And light his eyes with their sight

A pair of hazel eyes in a sea of blue
Make tortured heart bleed red in pain
And the rain which pours in romance
Can scarcely make first love sane

A pair of hazel eyes flit about the room
Entrancing all but resting on none
And yet they enliven the heart within
Which it seems, has a life of its own

A pair of hazel eyes in a universe of verse
Make life's little sorrows endurable
  And should it be, that they rest upon him
  It shall be the start of yet another fable

Reviews

[Red Raven]

'Make the mirror crack in sweet delight'= thats a beautiful line.delicate and blissfull.thanks for sharing.

[paul]

great title. beautifully written. great ending too

[Rossen]

This is a favorite for sure, you know me...
nice to see your romance out there.
100/100

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

what a lovely lively composition~ ethereal and gossamer soft~ the wisps of language woven in extreme grace~ lovely~

[abhas]

and i sincerely hope that the fable shall be magnificent... wonderful work... it is painted to catch the mind's eye...skillful and delightful...

[arbitrary jane]

hazel is a gorgeous thing.

and 'universe of verse' is brilliant.

[Robin]

prelude to romance in the key of hazel ~ wishes and hopes floating before a pair of eyes and an entranced heart ~