Meteorology

Drops
Flow in rivulets
Form a stream

Drops
Fall in drizzles
Make an ocean

Drops
Go up in air
In patterns unseen

Drops
Down my cheeks
End of a dream

Dropped
Down the skies
The sweetest dream

Dropped
On my arms
My eyes gleamed

Dropped
Her to death
Want a requiem

Dropped
Everything away
Can't be redeemed

Drop
Drip
Trip

Reviews

[OT]

I like how the drop expanded to dropped - like that rain drop that grows as it falls before the - drip - trip - splash - the repetition is executed very well here - it mimics the sound of the rain drop too - almost counting the beat drop.... drop... drop - very clever write - though would we expect any less! nice!

[alan peter kelly]

acquious cascadence...aglow with uncomplicated and concise poetic devices...that disolve like medicine and spreads as subtle warmth within the entirety of my essence...

[Joiedevivre]

a slow deluge of emotion. i dropped with you.

[Nothing Personal]

Critical. critical. critical. My friend, you swell with your drops, drips and trips here..Excellent title..too many layers to a simple worded short piece..these are good great times pal..keep writing..

[paul]

great title. the poem is unique and excellent

[Jasmine]

the repetition of drop(ped) is very effective, as are the images paired with it. lovely...

[Reena]

Drop, Drip , trip--would have loved to continue reading more , the effect was mesmeric! Loved the way you squeezed out a river from a few drops.

[Emily B]

lovely

[Christie Moses]

there is something so sweetly sad about this that reaches in my heart and holds on. Funny thing about poetry, we all interpet in our own way. I suppose that is truly the beauty of it.
You do have such a talent.