foretold

What if there is an NLE as well.

was crushed and crashed

-slowly losing

 

consciousness-

 

.                .                  .

 

up in your arms

 

you took me

 

i had a

 

near

love

experience

Author's Note

A near-death experience (NDE) refers to a broad range of personal experiences associated with impending death, encompassing multiple possible sensations including detachment from the body; feelings of levitation; extreme fear; total serenity, security, or warmth; the experience of absolute dissolution; and the presence of a light.
Source - Wikipedia

Reviews

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

This is an excellent write and I wanted to take a moment and personally congrats you on placing in the "Powerful Short Poetry Contest" thanks for partiscipating.

[-Scribe in Style-]

beautiful...

[Maya Storm]

:0 ) a near love experience, that is absolutely brilliant I've had a few of those.

[dutch2lips]

smiles, loved this, well done

[...]

Great set up, love the vivid words and the ending .

[arbitrary jane]

yep. love.. .sheesh. its the shore that the moon keeps sending us ocean poets crashing over.

that 'near love experience' line... good good stuff.

[Jasmine]

I like the simplicity of this poem. I think the second verse works better than the first. I'm not quite sure why; perhaps because it's more pithy and coherent.

[Seshat Nidaba]

near love experience, hehe, nice touch. I like the fluid way you write.

[Lily Mae]

This is perfect...you made my heart skip a beat.. lovely.. :) x

[Khaaki]

Brilliant... love just comes from within... A near love experience is often the farthest one gets...