A Pair Of Blue Eyes

A pair of blue eyes
Encompass the world within
As their sight alights on my eyes
A kaleidoscope enthralls my senses
Memories of previous lifetimes
Come swirling back again
Is this only a fleeting moment?
Or a part of the game
That reunites old souls
To their anchors in the seas

Faraway the wind blows stronger
The butterfly seems more radiant
The rainbow is but a bridge
That ties two beating hearts together
And the spring blows sweet melodies
That draw me to her
And I let go of myself
For it is no use fighting
When the universe has a plan for you

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

I love this..it's perfect..x

[Sel Whiteley]

The predestination of true love is exquisitely captured in this poem. You deal with the theme so sensitively and engage classic symbols in a new way which reflects how people come to reexamine the world when they are in love. An excellent poem.

[Rossen]

I like how you think and flood thoughts of positive currents
all around me while ride out to sea with a universal plan

Rossen

[Katannaism]

I love the beautiful metaphors here! It's amazing-
It also has a really fragile tale to it. Love it-Keep it up! :)

[Wallflower]

The universe has a plan indeed my friend.
I love this, reminds me that life is my favorite game :)

[Emily B]

these are beautiful words

[abhas]

" The rainbow is but a bridge
That ties two beating hearts together" .... beautiful lines... in a free flowing verse and drizzle of emotions.. great work.. the universe has a plan for everyone...

[theunionisloud]

I love how you use metaphor in this poem as *more* than just a way to paint a pretty picture... you actually tie them into the transitions. Really unique. "The anchors in the seas, the rainbow is but a bridge"... good, good!

[msharma]

As if reminiscent past is knocking at your door,Hope you may get throughand will get smooth with the time.