You...

On the canvas of life

With divine colors, luminous hues

Many figures he drew 

None were as beautiful till

In his desire to create something new

He etched a picture of you...

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Beautiful.

[OT]

:) simple beauty, a great little poem here!! the canvas of life!!!

[paul]

excellent little poem

[theunionisloud]

Beautiful and simple. A lot of poems I read are dark and obscure (which, in my opinion, are also very beautiful), but this was very sweet and clear-cut. Refreshing!

[Robin]

I like it !

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. absolutely divine and exquisite poetry ... simply profound and ravishing and skillful ...

[Stacey]

Oh My this is fantastic! Not any canvas, but one that is life and to see her in new hues, divine colors and brand new.....sigh...this is breathe taking and with such gentle passion. Wonderful write!

[Arabdha]

like this one best..amazing !!

[Nothing Personal]

Beautiful..the best poems arouse a emotion with few words , it did that to me.. :-)

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Nice!