Only Love Remains

Into the rabbit hole she leapt
Letting go as she gently slipped
Her hair aglow, her body adrift
Dancing, twirling in the darkness beneath

The day grew darker, night bolder
The waves and the winds cried
Waves a bit wetter, winds a bit colder
World upturned as time went blind

Reviews

[Kousika]

Your choice of words are superb .. But, I think you would have explained it more deeply by extending your poem to one more para... It looks too small and little difficult to understand...
Otherwise, it reveals good feeeeeel...