If, Only

If you could see the world through my eyes

You’d see so much more than just the blue skies

As we lose us in the timelessness of cosmic eternity

Wafting through the skies as fleeting time flies

 

If you could walk with me a little bit further

We shall outlive our shared lives together

Every act of love creating ripples of kindness

In the endless realms of the supreme creator

 

If you could hold my hand amidst all doubts

However hard the demand to conform may mount

Fighting the clamor and demand to play our scripted roles

We’ll jump across fences; leap over mortal bounds

 

For our lives are connected - past, present and future

Joined across time by delicately crafted sutures

And each moment that we change by spending it together

Changes the world along its course like the flowing river

Reviews

[jhumur]

one of your finest creations buddy!!
there is a constant rhythm in every stanza.. reminds of a waterfall you know!! as we keep on going down & down the sound magnifies and till we reach the bottom, which is the origin of emerging waves.. overcoming manmade fences, leap over mortal bounds..
very matured.. very magnificient.. very beautiful.. very expressive.. see my words..!!! read after ages.. n you made my day!!

[Benny]

I like the flow of it all - and it's very well written and thought out.

[quinfinn]

this is beautiful, i am deeply touched by your expression of emotions herein and i applaud the way you have immortalized your feelings. color me impressed and slightly jealous...well done, my friend!

[Marie]

If only we could infinity instead of the finite...see the connections instead of the separations...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is beautifully written...of what can be... through your eyes. I envision gentleness, a love growing and joining together to flow in the river of life. Beautiful!