Hymns

Beautiful love poem

Hymns of love whispered in my ear
laid me down within nurturing meadows
soothed my unbridled passion
soothed my pained emotion

lay me down with your sweet hymns
lay me down within these shrubs of lilacs
let nature embrace my sombre
cuddle my insecurities whilst
reassuring my doubts

sing me to my sleep
let thy melodic tune sway my spirit
unearth my forgotten senses, sway my soul.
kiss my temple
sprawl my soul thus it
ventures within the beehives
swing among the gigantic whales
rested afloat with the idling stars
kiss me with your hymns

thus the moment comes
you will hymn me to my awaken
bade me to my sense of reality
caress me to my securities
O' my dear soloist
leave me not at peace, forever hymn.
give me life
give me hope
enrapture me with your melody
hymn me to my straight
hymn me to my love.

Author's Note

any critical criticism is welcomed, please enjoy

Reviews

[Taino]

You can feel the serenity and hope within each line. A beautiful calming, peaceful piece.

[Jamestown]

Nice calming and peaceful piece of work! Very well written, great flow
and wording, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[stanley]

Thanks for the feedback, Jamestown