hurt

its not your fist that hurt,

its your words,

 the tears wash away the blood you make,

the bruises fade but the hurt stays,

the tears dry,

but i am still crying inside,

i am broken.

Reviews

[Anthony Sosa]

Thats deep

[Wingless Fallen Angel]

Very emotional, shy. Sehr gut!

[asdarkeyesclose]

'the tears dry
but i am still crying inside,'

very simple but highly moving and emotionally charged. very strong last line. fantastic.

[Bella]

beautiful...raw and beautiful. Good job!