let me..

let me dream,

let me scream,

let me wish,

let me aspire,

let my imagination catch some fire ;

i welcome your opinions and advice,

but that doesn't mean you can rule my life;

i know i can go wrong but it isn't a crime,

for u also went through the same

you know there was a time;

i'll learn from my mistakes,it will help me grow

for life is not always jolly good,it also has some sorrows;

i can't promise a huge success but i'll definitely be satisfied,

i'll be super happy to see that atleast i tried..

Reviews

[Mitchell Spratlin]

I love this, I can relate the meaning to my current life situation. I would just fix up some of it to make it flow better, and this poem would be even more amazing.