That Place!

That Place!

A Poem by Shweta Shah
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Its not a poem actually... Just penned my thoughts...

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She was Claustrophobic...

The only Place she found solace, was…

In His Embrace!!!

© 2015 Shweta Shah


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Very nice use of words. Described what was needed in 13 words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shweta Shah

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Profound brevity! So much said in so few words! Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shweta Shah

9 Years Ago

Thanks alot!
Indra Neil

9 Years Ago

u r most welcome!
don't we all..........?
such sweet thoughts.......
this could easily be converted in a senryu........
beautiful write.....
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shweta Shah

9 Years Ago

Thank u so much!
I will surely try to convert it into one or rather write a new one!
I.. read more
Short and eloquent. Yet so vivid portrayal of sentiments..! Nice work liked it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shweta Shah

9 Years Ago

Thank u so much!
Feels great wen its coming from u...

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Added on July 23, 2015
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Shweta Shah
Shweta Shah

Surat, Gujarat, India



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