The Day I'll Give up!

I wrote this way back when I felt life is full of chaos and all I can do is deal with it! Its just ME, venting out,all my feelings at once!

I don’t know when I’ll give up

Will it be the day

When one more person will start humiliating me

Or

When again due to misunderstanding I would be punished again.

Will it be the day

When one more person I trust’ll ditch me

Or

When in all I’ll be the only person left standing.

Will it be the day

When all the people I love’ll go away from me

Or

When I’ll loose all the modes of contact I have with them

Will it be the day

When I’ll be sad

Or

When I’ll have nothing to smile about.

Will it be the day

When I’ll loose all the hope

Or

When I’ll only have regrets and nothing to hope for.

Will it be the day

When I’ll die

Or

When I’ll nothing to live for

Will it be the day

When I’ll loose moments of joy

Or

When I’ll find no enjoyment in anything

Will it be the day 

When everything around me will go dark

Or

I myself will be blind enough to see the light in front of me!

(Or the beauty around me)

Will it be the day

When all the people around me turn into a psycho

Or

When I’ll be the psycho myself!

Will it be the day

When I’ll find living very hard

Or

When I’ll find dying very easy.

Author's Note

Work of an amateur...Just poured my heart out and i can totally understand if any of you disagrees!

Reviews

[Mukul]

U placed exact suitable phrases
Everybody could approve this sort of poetry

[Shweta Shah]

Thanks a lot! And sorry for replying so late...

[Coyote Poetry]

Giving up and giving in. Hard to do. Difficult to lose concern and hope. A powerful poem that left the reader with questions and possibilities. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Shweta Shah]

Thanks for the review.
It means a lot coming from you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

those days should never come.........but even even they come.......you must not give up ever.....
though writing.......
i liked it!!!
:)

[Shweta Shah]

thank you so much!
i really appreciate,you, giving your time for reviewing it!

[Shweta Shah]

thank you so much!
i really appreciate,you, giving your time for reviewing it!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Again loved it! Style is great and words are apt.
The lines I best liked,
" Will it be the day, When I’ll find living very hard Or When I’ll find dying very easy."
Keep up the good work!

[Shweta Shah]

thanks a lot jyoti!
u liking those lines the best, means i ended the poem appropriately!

[Shweta Shah]

thanks a lot jyoti!
u liking those lines the best, means i ended the poem appropriately!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Its a pleasure.