Demons

Dedicated to my brother 

I am not afraid of my demons 

Although I am meant to be 

We all fight its premises 

But don't want to get it revealed 

There are some demons that I control 

 But there are some, who control me… 

 -sh va

Reviews

[Akki]

Simple, Short and Sweet like Salty Biscuits.
The taste was salty and I really like it. It's true that we have some demerits but, they're not like demons who can't change or refuse to change. Slowly but, definitely you change them into your weakness to your strengths and everyone has some demons like this so don't need to be afraid of it.
I really main concept and message that you delivered through this poem.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

[Deepak Belbase]

Thanks for your insightful review!

[Riddhi]

I found the last line really true - THERE ARE SOME DEMONS WHO I CONTROL AND SOME WHO CONTROL ME...That is very true...I would be eager to know how your brother reacted to this piece of writing of yours...And yes i really liked the way you said WE ALL FIGHT ITS PREMISES BUT DON'T WANT TO GET IT REVEALED...Here i assume after reading this poem that demons are our fears or simply our weaknesses or our bad features..Am i true???As far as i felt i really felt that there are some fear , some weakness and some of our bad features or our bad characters that we control and some that control us..Looking forward to read more of your poem..
Well done...
Keep on writing..
Riddhi
and yes don't forget to tell me hoe your brother reacted and also your friend pratibha after reading the poem BEAUTIFUL..

[Deepak Belbase]

you are true about all your assumption. I don't know what would be his reaction. I don't even know if he'd read it or he know it's for him. the sole aim of writing this poem was to tell him that. it's ok! we all have some demons. we don't need to afraid of our demons. He is an inspiration for me. He's very good man. Very straight forward and very strong. I'm proud of him.

And I really don't know if she'd read the poem 'beautiful'. We don't talk anymore....

[Riddhi]

Oh..Why don't you talk????And you have not shown this poem to your brother???

[Deepak Belbase]

no! i never show this piece to him. And it's her who is not talking... I suppose no body like to talk with bad people. maybe that's why she is not talking...

[Riddhi]

You are not a bad person..You should not think it that way...Maybe someday she will understand that you do consider her a good friend of yours..And please take out that thought out of your mind that you are a bad person...