Fate

Fate

A Poem by Deepak Belbase
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"What is a fate? that I choose for me?"

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to my angels


I’m not a soul, neither a shade,

you think I never follow the rules

but I always made mistakes,

It’s true I’m led by the angels

one is white and other is dark

But, I choose my own way that you think I got it by my fate…


sh va

© 2018 Deepak Belbase


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Deepak Belbase
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Wisdom in these words. I have always said.We decide our journey. Good or bad? I like the flow of thoughts leading to good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Deepak Belbase

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind review... :-)
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I like the thought process here because it seems that everyone wants to blame their actions and choices on something or someone else. For example, someone would say it's the "dark side of them" causing them to do bad things at times. But here, you take responsibility for your actions, whether they're bad or otherwise. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Deepak Belbase

8 Years Ago

thanks for your review. By the way if they won't blame someone else they won't be their own Hero... .. read more

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Added on December 25, 2015
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Deepak Belbase
Deepak Belbase

Hyderabad, Telangana, India



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Deepak Belbasé, writing under my pen name sh va I’m 27 years old young man writing poetry and lyrics. You may call me a poet. Writing brings so many things to my life desire, passion, dr.. more..

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