Love in Action

In my Dreams I see reflection of you

to love, a beautiful feeling...

Love in action

May not have perfection

But every time in my dreams

I see the reflection of yours

Fear of separation

Killing me in depression

Isn't that love

We live for sure

Every time I breathe

Every second I live

I fight with a nightmare

Forever to lose you

I am afraid to lose you

I am afraid to hurt you

I want your love

and I want it more

sh va

Author's Note

And Thanks Jyoti to make it more beautiful... All Reviews are welcome! and don't forget to rate this!

Reviews

[Fazil shaik]

Deepak i just love your words of emotions about love..The way u expressed is quite good.somewhere it connected to my feelings.nice job man!!!

[Deepak Belbase]

Thanks fazil for your insightful review

[Emily]

'Every time I breathe'

I loved that line!
Keep on writing!!

[Deepak Belbase]

Thanks for your review

[Riddhi]

This is really nice poem...Great work although i do not understand much on this topic...Thanks for sharing....

[Deepak Belbase]

thanks for ur review! and I hope you enjoyed it

[Tobias H. Reese]

I need to read more of your works to understand your style, but I understand the sentiment of this piece and am glad that I read it. Thank you for the reading request. Peace.

[Deepak Belbase]

thanks for your review and i'm glad you like it!

[Deanna M.]

This is a very nice poem about love. How love can be lost, and how love can be fought for. Very well written, and a good job!!

[Deepak Belbase]

thanks for your review! :-)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Well love has the power to create and destroy!
This is a lovely piece. There are some lines that reach across and touched the readers.
Amazingly penned!

[Deepak Belbase]

thanks for ur help as well as your review!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.