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A Poem by Deepak Belbase
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"let me Free from the fear"

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To Kanchi

Let me free from all limitations
Free me from this life that you’ve choose for me
Don’t trap me in your love
cause I can’t act like someone else

Let me free from my sorrow
I don’t want to be like others
Kiss me till my heart fell apart
But don’t make any promise that I would do this only to thee

Let me free my wings to fly
cause I want to see the hills and mysterious sea
I want to do this in real
cause I can’t close my eyes to pretend that I feel...


sh va

© 2018 Deepak Belbase


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Deepak Belbase
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Well, I wont go so deep Man,

but yes..so impressive...



Posted 8 Years Ago


Deepak Belbase

8 Years Ago

thanks for your review! :-)
Freedom is to die for, it's sad that people die for freedom that never comes.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Deepak Belbase

8 Years Ago

it's a state of mind a man is just need to free from his personal insecurity... we are only traps in.. read more
Tamika Finley

8 Years Ago

that is so true
Nice work!
The urge for freedom can be felt in this piece with candour.
Keep up the good work! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Deepak Belbase

9 Years Ago

Thanks for ur review
Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

You are welcome!

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Added on August 15, 2015
Last Updated on December 16, 2018
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Deepak Belbase
Deepak Belbase

Hyderabad, Telangana, India



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Deepak Belbasé, writing under my pen name sh va I’m 27 years old young man writing poetry and lyrics. You may call me a poet. Writing brings so many things to my life desire, passion, dr.. more..

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