Ruins

Ruins

A Poem by Deepak Belbase
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"Every end is a new Beginning"

"

To the Earthquake Victims of 25 April 2015 in Nepal


If it's the end of a rule

or ruins in War

for every new beginning

the old kingdom has to fall


sh va

© 2018 Deepak Belbase


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Ah, this seems kingly! Wise words expressed in a beautiful way...This dates back to 2015...I'm a 'bit' late...The tremors were felt in our city too...I guess that was the first time i experienced an earthquake...thankfully, no one was hurt. A great dedication to the victims. Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Deepak Belbase

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind review!
Zoya

7 Years Ago

No problem
Everything said in four lines.great work!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is the truth of truths. It is the way we humans live. One cannot save everyone for one must be sacrificed. I like the way that your poem is so short, but the message is so big.

Good job :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very beautiful lines. Awesome

Posted 9 Years Ago


Deepak Belbase

9 Years Ago

thanks for ur review
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Gee
Very profound,well done...........

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

out of the ruins will rise a new, stronger nation...

old kingdom out, new kingdom in.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A shaking truth and a profound realization....maybe we're already the ashes of a civilization....deep wite.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Deepak Belbase

9 Years Ago

thanks for your review
This is definitely interesting, speaking about the silver lining in a subtle way !

Posted 9 Years Ago


Deepak Belbase

9 Years Ago

Thanks Susana for your Review
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B
Extremely creative in a pious way
I love the cause and your urge to write for it

Very righteous
A call out for hope
That what disappears must have held bad blood to be replaced with something way better
Amazing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deepak Belbase

9 Years Ago

I'm agree with you. Bad Blood should be replaced with something better. But whether it is war or dis.. read more
These are very strong words my friend. Keep it up :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Deepak Belbase

9 Years Ago

Thanks for Review my Friend!

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Added on June 11, 2015
Last Updated on December 16, 2018
Tags: Ruins, Distruction, Hope

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Deepak Belbase
Deepak Belbase

Hyderabad, Telangana, India



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Deepak Belbasé, writing under my pen name sh va I’m 27 years old young man writing poetry and lyrics. You may call me a poet. Writing brings so many things to my life desire, passion, dr.. more..

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