I won't!Until you will!

“To let go is to release the images and emotions, the grudges and fears, the clingings and disappointments of the past that bind our spirit.” – Jack Kornfield

I WON’T!UNTIL YOU WILL!

A silent reverie:

Leaving the rope we’ve once tightly held,

Seeing it as a proof of our love sentiment

A poor rope!

Unheld!

Broken!

Hanging so lonely and powerless…

Dropping those sweats.So fresh!

Fresh as the  flashback of

Our past-”the old happy us!”

It’s fragment was so lucid

Telling how we’ve been working

But ended up to nothing…

Worthless!

But it was so vague

So unclear enough to have

A just reason why you have to give up first?

You left me grieving

While holding this broken rope

I kept on telling you,

“We can do this! We can still save this!”

But no!Your fate faded…

You give up on me!

You’re so coward enough

To surrender that easily.

And I am this solid-still hoping

Fighting it by my own

Pulling the rope up!

Investing my own sweat and pain

Because I love you this much

At times I doubted my strength

Why am I the only one fighting?

Why am I the only one hoping?

Hoping for our  love be

Rebuild again!

May it be healed again!

Thus,the scars won’t disappear!

I am just being martyr

Because I really miss you this much!

I want you back!

I can’t move on!

I’m still not convinced of your reason

It was so genuine

That I find it so unreal

Why you’d given me up?

And I won’t stop asking

Until you would realized,

You leave me questioning my worth

I won’t stop hoping

Until you would know my pain

And I won’t stop loving you

Until you’ll tell me

You’re no longer the same person

Who love me much before!

Reviews

[Onlyme]

A broken heart is always a traumatic outcome to come to terms with, and understand how it came about. Between two lovers who worked together perfectly at one point. And then suddenly, it faded and was gone. As in your own heart and mind you think it can work again and be stronger than last time. But ironically and tragically it will never happen if that other person does not feel the same way. And if they ended it. The chances of it happen you wish to be back with them again as a couple will n't happen. Its like the old saying better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all. No one wants heartbreak, but then it happens for a reason. You have to learn to move on from it and accept it. And learn from it. And you grow as a person.

[Jude-Cipher]

Thanks you so much for the review Dawn!

[R. Bagby]

I long for a genuine ache for someone as this. The love is dangerous but so enriching and sweet.great piece.

[Lyrically Inclined]

Heartbreak is a hard pill to swallow but you never want to make someone be with you. They may come around but more than likely they’ll resent you or continue to use you. Let them go and they’ll figure out how much better you were than others and you can decide whether you want them back or if you will find somebody else that makes you happy.