My Dad's Definition

“In the darkest days, when I feel inadequate, unloved and unworthy, I remember whose daughter I am and I straighten my crown.” – Unknown

My Dad's Definition

It’s you who always gave me the reason

The reason to go with my way on

The man who was always been my weapon

When nobody dares to lean on

You always have this  big word

To create my big world

Your silver  is not what I wanted

But it’s your love that will never be take for granted

You’re a good teacher

When the world became tough teaser

You’re my carrier

When world give me so much burden

You’d been my Simon,

Helping me carry my cross to keep going on

You’d been my Shakespeare

Who gives symphonies on my fears

You loved me whatever I am

Molding  me to be a good one

I love you of what you are

And you’ll always be my man

Whatever life may takes

I’ll always be in you

I will always love you

My Dad,my love,and my brand new!

Reviews

[Katsura]

Great poem! I have just a couple tips. Firstly, I'd recommend changing it from "will never be take for granted" to "will never be taken for granted". Secondly, changing "When the world became tough teaser" to "When the world became a tough teaser". Finally, removing the extra space from between silver and is and between Molding and me, and adding a space after the commas after Dad and love in the last line. Overall a very beautiful work!!!

[Wild Rose]

What a lovely tribute to your DAd

[Jude-Cipher]

Yeah I hope so.Thanks!