Student's Rule

A paradoxical poem about how should a student act out.In today's time students act became more risky because of some distractions and factor that surrounds them may it be technologically or socially.

Student’s Rule

Jude-Cipher

Go to school-way;

Not to internet cafe

Save for allowance;

And not for net fee

Cheer for grades;

Not for online games

Read helpful books;

And not timeline status

Be punctual at school;

Not on alcohol

Have an inspiration;

And not a distraction

Search for topics;

Not for crushes

Be a teacher’s favorite;

And be not the parent’s heartache

Be a classmate’s buddy;

Not a haughty bully

Stand with dignity;

And not on weak fantasy

Dream for a degree;

Not for an early family

Go to university;

And build your future perfectly!

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

although usually not a fan for rhyme...this works so well because every word fits the theme so well.
I am a teacher and can really appreciate this...the model student....aha ....which when i was an undergrad, i was not so model...better in grad school,luckily.
but this is cleverly composed.
j.

[Jude-Cipher]

Thank You so much for the review Jacob!I'm very happy to hear that!

[Jade]

Dream for a degree;
Not for an early family
Go to university;
And build your future perfectly!

Yes! But what is right for one person isn't always right for someone else, and will everyone should learn a trade, but some just do not have the money. This is so good.

[Jude-Cipher]

Thank You so much!

[Onlyme]

The Ying and Yang of schooling and education. Great read and thoughtful, entertaining and truthful.

[Jude-Cipher]

Thank you so much!