Can You Tell Him?

This is a typical and common subject of teens right now about falling in love with the friend they used to know,but afraid of telling it for the sake of saving the friendship.

"Can You Tell Him?

-Jude-Cipher-

If you're gonna read this

Can I ask you for one request?

Can you tell him that this piece is for him?

Tell him that this is from someone but never tell my name

Tell him that I'm safely playing

In hiding this feeling

Because I don't wanna ruin

Our friendship that reigns

Tell him that I treasured him as a jewel

And care for him as I always will

Though not as sweet as honey

But true as for infinity

Tell him I thanked him

For being there in my pains

And for being the ones

Who wipes my tears

Tell him I'm sorry

For acting sometimes in strange way

For passing in different way

For I don't wanna let him feel I'm envy

Tell him to take care

Because I secretly care

Though it prompt me a lot of pains

As long as his happy being with others

Lastly,can you tell him

To never change

Once he knows I'm the poet of this piece

Cause I don't wanna break "us" into pieces

Tell him I'm sorry for feeling this way

I just don't know how would I pretend thoroughly

Because whatever happens this won't be denied in anyways

But tell him whatever it takes "He will be always my piece”

Author's Note

If you have any suggestions,comments,or anything to add about.Don't hesitate to tell it guys I'm open and very willing to accept your ideas.Thank You!

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Nice expressed, heartfelt and sincere. Trying to express your strong overwhelming emotions for someone who is more than just a friend. But as you said. Trying not to scare them or push them away from you. And losing them forever in your life. So you try to find a happy balance of being with them but still safeguarding your overwhelming emotions at times for them.

[Katsura]

This is, for lack of a better phrase, a big mood. Looks great, just change "you'd" to "you're" and you're golden!

[Jude-Cipher]

Thanks a lot for your suggestion!I really appreciated it.It was kinda guide for a young writer like me.