Wavering over colourful town

WAVERING OVER COLOURFUL TOWN

In my dreams
Rings your scream
In a colourful town
I am mad at you
And your humour too
But I am mind blown
And the next moment I
Feel the need to cry
And the colours fade away
My dream's now dull and gray
My body feels stiff and cold
Those shoulders are numb you hold
I can see your tears
I can feel your sorrow
But I will never wake again
Not today no tomorrow
But be sure to remember me
In your memory like that day
When we weren't endowed with pain
Like innocent children we used to play
I hope for your glamorous dawn
Similar to that sun that's shone
In next life maybe
Our paired timelines will be broad
Side by side, holding hands
We will walk that colourful road

Reviews

[¿]

Ok! Glamorous dawn reminds me....Fiza ki sham hu main...tu hai nayi subha...tujhe jeena hai..mere bina...!!
Sorry to relate with song..I just remembered so......
If the life's in a cycle then surely after the fading of colours like boomerang twill become vibrant again....colourful road will appear...but again surely it's gonna be long to reach!
Amazingly penned....great read!!😇

[Riddhi]

It have been long time since I read your writings..And now as I read them I feel that same magic of your writings again..When I read the title and when I started reading I never thought that it was going to be like this..But I liked the way it turned out..I indeed liked it..I liked the whole concept and the way you portrayed it is worth appreciating..You know in our life there is autumn but always there is a spring after that to make your life colourful again..I hope that your life will get that spring soon..Great read..
Keep writing..