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I am not alone
I have a friend a very special friend
Whose name is lonliness
Like the rest of them 
It doesn't backbite me
But hurts me in the face
Yes it hurts 
Yes I feel the pain
But the pain of truth is senile
And the other very sly
Desperation and insecurities I have
But with a smiling face I adorn my day
None of my friends can see the difference
But lonliness bends my way 
Roots of it lies in the soul of my life
And it earns to die someday 
The pangs of love which I have felt 
Ought to end forever someday

Author's Note

Hello everyone this is my second work . Now i am open to all the critical reviews. Yes I know the poetry sucks but please dont mention it in the comment.

Reviews

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Every existing in the world has got something to do with us nor why it's been made?!
So even loneliness does keep a role here....You may find it as your friend, another can find saddest time in it, and for some it's just the antonym of togetherness!!
Happy writing😊

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes I know the poetry sucks but please dont mention it in the comment.

Why so :D lol
Btw
Its good, but you need to work more on that!
With time you'll

All the best