when you reach the sky...

Walk in front of me

want you to lead always.

Want to watch the long strides that you take.

Want to see the wonders that you shall make.

Want to see the stars shine in your eyes,

and the music of your voice,

and the smile that will take my breath away

when you shall reach the sky one day...

And when this shall happen

your eyes shall search for me,

and I'll be here waiting for you,

for that smile that shall take my breath away.

And I shall see the stars in your eyes,

and surrender to the music of your voice,

when you reach the sky...

Author's Note

for that special someone...this is all about love and the extent to which one shall go so that he or maybe she remains happy forever...

Reviews

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when you reach the sky,
you'll meet their with above the sky,
wanna you get that height with a successive shy,
ascent & touch that skky ,
& fly over & over the sky......................that's "Above the sky".....!!

Anyway, i liked + loved = enjoyed your way or working too....well written, loved here few lines.....
Want to watch the long strides that you take.
Want to see the wonders that you shall make.

Want to see the stars shine in your eyes,
and the music of your voice,
and the smile that will take my breath away
when you shall reach the sky one day........well written much.your pic. is damn nice as well......there;s a depth in yer words...........great job....beautiful piece........by Being-human......(me too a biggest fan of being-human, & hope he'll soon get married)........:)

[being me]

thank you so much....am really happy you liked my poem cause this 1 means a lot to me as i've poured my soul into it...thank you thank you thank you....

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welcome...welcome....welcome....

[zainul]

Great note of love.
Wonderful write.
Hope your lover will reach the sky soon.
My most favorite stanza is:
"And when this shall happen
your eyes shall search for me,
and I'll be here waiting for you,
for that smile that shall take my breath away."

[being me]

thank you:)

[zainul]

You are most welcome :)

[being me]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[Us&Them]

Great intro (:

[Salar Majak]

awwwwwwww this is so sweet :3 i love the poem, the soft emotion and the image it reflects. great job

[being me]

thank you:)

[Nithin Purple]

very nice poem well written

[gabrielle]

this is so sweet. lucky guy/girl.

[The Nude Writer]

Beautiful poem! I love a good positive love poem. Well done indeed :)

[AWickedMoon]

A nice romantic poem you should enter it in my "Poetry Reading"contest

[vspjaguar]

"stars in your eyes and the music in your voice" very poetic and romantic indeed.

[Jack...]

Very beautiful and the man should consider himself lucky.