stolen moments...

The phases of love,

i don't really understand...

Earlier i saw you unruly, passionate,

every blink of your eyes told me how you wished

  that everything would vanish, so you'd get me all by yourself...

Those stolen moments hidden away...

You told me your entire world now stood between your hands.

Oh how i blushed! how i feared

        someone might come near...

I pushed you only to find you coming closer...

helpless, bound by love, I...

Those stolen moments hidden away...

Oh how i blush even now to think of them.

I laid the rules, and you broke them.

One by one, you unruly, passionate...

me...helpless, bound by love...

But now what has changed?

You make the rules

rules which I find hard to break...

I trust you. I trust your love.

I trust your rules to take us to love...

Yet why do I hurt within,

    putting up for you?

Why do I want much more than before?

Why does it keep on paining?

But I know, so do you...

and so I console myself,

though it's hard to accept,

the changes that are now.

I'd rather live with those before,

cause I know what happened then.

I made rules for you to break them,

but you made them for me to keep...

Reviews

[Pradeep Nair]

"I laid the rules, and you broke them.
One by one, you unruly, passionate...
me...helpless, bound by love...".......> these lines explicitly paints 'Helplessness'!

You trust the love, trust the rules, trust the universe around..
but Love remains painful.. its the paramount of truth.

Well crafted and live. Keep going.

[being me]

thank you

[Us&Them]

The first paragraph painted a wonderful picture (:
Poetic work Miz (:

[being me]

thank you:)

[Nithin Purple]

well written, a nice poem it was,
Oh how i blush even now to think of them.
I laid the rules, and you broke them.
One by one, you unruly, passionate...
me...helpless, bound by love...
Nice lines got my attention,kip on write:)

[being me]

thank you:)

[Nithin Purple]

you were welcome::

[Kate LeFleur]

I Love it!

[being me]

thank you:)