A twilight

It's a very simple poem about how a twilight is and how it feels for a person when they experience it

Who is fortunate to experience a twilight...??

I would say its a a farmer

It's the time before morning and after night

Definitely a beautiful night

The coconut tree's leaves

brush each other in the wind...

The silver water dew

get's ready to sparkle with the sunlight

The streets observe silence

The birds ready to fly

horse's ready neigh

Aroma is ready to dangle in the air

It's nature's gift 

for the earth and sky

it has the beauty lift

IT's a serene atmosphere 

till the morn near's

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

nice images and description.
but needs a little work.....(in my opinion). so maybe go over it a couple of more times.
otherwise, a lovely poem!!
i liked it!!!
:)

[Surya pradha]

agree with your words. twilight is beautiful

[Sami Khalil]

"It's nature's gift

for the earth and sky

it has the beauty lift"

You have summed it up marvelously. Thank you for sharing...:)....................

[Shekinah2015]

Very nice, lovely poem. However, the first and third verses in the first stanza feel slightly out of place - the meter is a little messed up. Great job otherwise.

[Mary Bosworth]

this is such a lovely piece. it touched my heart and soul

[raj24]

that hour of night is really beautiful.. so often during our college we used to go out of our hostels and roam around... your description is beautiful ... an image that relaxes our mind..

Raj