The shattered heart

The shattered heart

A Poem by shruthi
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A normal feeling which gives you lot of pain though... HERATBREAKS

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Standing alone in a lonely lane
Gathering the piece's of my heart
which broke because of you
all i hear is dogs and wolves
I try to stick them
well,they don't seem to fit
Giving up,near the lamp post I sit
waiting for a new day and
hopes that don't evade
feel like holding on to some one
and never let go...!!!
I need to join the shattered heart
or rip it apart
as life is short
I've planned to gather it fast
and let it breath till the last
heart is that which break's often
the one which bear's the non subsiding sadness
Heart breaks makes our life a total madness

© 2014 shruthi


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heart breaks often helps us in being better individuals...it helped me to learn a lot about myself.. its the story of heart which we can sing again and again.. i enjoyed reading it.. your emotions flow well with your words.. thanks for sharing Shruthi :)

Raj

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Touching words! You expressed yourself very well.
*You might want to work on your meter a little. It has some abrupt changes.

Posted 10 Years Ago


heart breaks often helps us in being better individuals...it helped me to learn a lot about myself.. its the story of heart which we can sing again and again.. i enjoyed reading it.. your emotions flow well with your words.. thanks for sharing Shruthi :)

Raj

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this. Great work. My favorite is the rip it apart line. Shows such hope and conflict. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shruthi

10 Years Ago

thank you so much ruby it's really sweet of you...:D

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shruthi
shruthi

bangalore, India



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