My life

My life

A Poem by shruthi
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Feeling sad of my life

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I started hating my life,
No one cares for me,
No one loves me,
Even though I don't do wrong,
All scoldings for me,
I can't see parents discrimination and
showing more love on elder sister
and avoiding younger its me....
But still I care for them...
Everytime feeling lonely,
Only Durga devi God stays in my sorrows ,
But still have hope of light coming into my life........

© 2017 shruthi


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Hey my fine young friend, I must agree with my reviewing predecessor aine who seems to have hit the nail on the head. Hang on in there and continue writing.....N

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Life can change in one moment. Hang on and keep writing. You'll find the right path.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shruthi

7 Years Ago

Yes sure.Thanks for your review and encouragement

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Added on October 23, 2017
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shruthi
shruthi

bangalore, hindu, India



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I am creative and dynamic writer of my own ideas and thoughts. I am Singer,dreamer, I love poetries and that too to write creatively.... more..

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