Feel at peace

Feel at peace

A Poem by lyssilou

She sits on the shore
scribbling her name in the soft sand
hearing the sweet, soft sound of singing waves
seeing the sun set on the south of the shore
seeing the peace of the sea
makes her feel sweet, soft, and secrete

© 2010 lyssilou


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That's really pretty! Simple & Elegent! Love it!

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aw sounds like a scene froms a movie! 10/10

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lyssilou
lyssilou

MN



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I am from a small town in MN, but not small enough that everyone knows your name kind of town. Ha Ha! Any way if you are new to my page, I am not a writer who spends every waking minute, that is free.. more..

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