Short Poem

The moonlight drenches our skin, 

hand in hand, we wonder the streets.

Blue eyes, I see the summer sky in

your bright smile.. Nights upon nights, 

wondering beneath city lights and

this feeling will neVer get old. 

Your body buried within my arms,

and your heart beat keeps rhythm 

with mine as sidewalks pour forth

in front of us. No one will know

where we're going as we walk

into the stars, miles upon miles and

hearts upon hearts, my life hasn't begun

until our lips start to touch. 

Reviews

[seal]

I like the ending a lot! Great Job!

[E. L. Foley]

A lovely poem with nice imagery that is picturesque without being too over-the-top.