No More

A one-liner written for a contest !!!

Small little pieces of my heart

Strewn across the floor

More like a shattered mirror

Which no one wants anymore...

Reviews

[rnuff]

This is awesome, I really enjoyed this write, deep

[Marie]

Very good simile...shattered heart, shattered mirror....

Why do you use "small" and "little" together. Isn't one of these words redundant?

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Thanks for the review !
And yes, they are redundant but I needed a 20 word poem for a contest... so I guess I failed to see that these two words shouldn't go together !

[Marie]

I didn't realize that you had to use just 20 words.

[Marie]

I would like to enter that contest; how do I find it?

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Its name is One sentence WOWZERS!