The Candle

A short poem about the dream of love coming true, and staying long enough for it to be celebrated !

I waited, waited for you to come to me
I counted, counted on you to set me free
Make me paint, paint an image of you in my mind
Where I hold, hold you tight like you were mine

And now you are mine, mine alone
That image, that dream, isn't a dream anymore
That candle of love we lit together, pray
Is still burning, and burn forever it may !

Reviews

[Erin]

This is beautiful. =)

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Thank you

[Sami Khalil]

I agree . Nice poem.

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Glad you liked it

[Sami Khalil]

I did . You are welcome.

[Forever Hidden]

I truly admire this poem! The paragraphs, the title, everything! Good write :)

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Thanks for the appreciation ! I actually wrote this for a friend of mine on the occasion of his first month anniversary(today) with his gf !