Play With My Heart

A random collection of words...

As seconds tick away,
I hold my breath and say..
Shall I survive another day ?
Or will I be blown away ...

The countdown has begun ...
As I look up to the sun ...
Broken, crushed, torn ...
They play with my heart for fun ...

They play with my heart for fun .... :'(

Reviews

[Erin]

I love you how repeat "They play with my heart for fun", it really gives the poem extra strength in the sadness. This poem is beautiful in showing heartache, quickly but beautifully.

[Shreyas Tripathy]

I am glad you enjoyed my work ! I appreciate your taking time to read my my works. Thank you :)

[Abhishek Ramchandran]

sad poem.... really stresses on the emotions felt on rejection..... :')