If Only...

if there is key,
i want to know where the lock is,
if there is a way,
i want to know where it leads to,
if there is time,
i want to know when it'll be over,
if there is a life,
then let me live.

if this is a dream,
then let me sleep till i die,
if there is to see,
then let leave and let it be,
if this is a game,
then i don't want to play it,
if this isn't me,
then i am probably already dead, inside.

Reviews

[Forever Hidden]

Why didn't anyone review this yet? XD

Anyways, I think I could make a song out of this. I usually do that to everyone's poems :P I love how you put the "oppisiteS" in.. Great work!

100/100 ( I would give more, but someone said only put a number between 1 and 100 sadly )

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Thanks a lot !!! I guess you could turn it into a song :)
I always felt as if this poem was incomplete or something, but your review regained my faith in it !!