Autumn's Kiss

The sun's warmth slowly melts
In Autumn's chill
In pale gold hazy belts
Over the hill

The green leaves swiftly fly
To mother Earth
In golden hearts to spy
Dreams of rebirth

The songbirds dance a jig
On branches bare
Sweet memories of a fig,
Perhaps a pear!

Night wears a perfumed cloak
of blossoms white
And glistening dewdrops soak
The cold moonlight

I walk with her, her hand
Is held in mine
On Heaven's shore I stand
I feel divine

I'm wrapped in naked bliss
I've naught to say
Surreal Autumn's Kiss
I'm blown away!

Reviews

[Hayley]

Excellent rhyme scheme and lovely imagery that so well describes my favorite season of autumn! There are always are so many options for symbolism and metaphorical illusions in this season. My favorite stanza was :The songbirds dance a jig
On branches bare
Sweet memories of a fig,
Perhaps a pear!
because it is interesting and so creative! I truly felt the autumn's kiss.
Superb work!!

[Emily Feret]

The songbirds dance a jig
On branches bare
Sweet memories of a fig,
Perhaps a pear!

What beautiful visuals!

[Penlady]

Surreal Autumn's Kiss
I'm blown away!
I think , through your words, you've described finally, the reall impression of Autumn!
Beautiful visions.

[Loner]

A total eye- popper piece !
beautiful imagination, excellent flow, captivating....

[Ruth]

Absolutely charmng flow to this piece!
I am blown away too! By the sheer elegance of the poem! Outstanding my friend, a wonderful read before bed here lol
xoxo

[Coyote Poetry]

A positive and beautiful poem. A Fall day can make us free and content.
"I walk with her, her hand
Is held in mine
On Heaven's shore I stand
I feel divine"
Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

[Luke Ritta]

great images flow into my mind when i read this poem.....good work

[An owl on the moon]

You carry us all over the colors and music of the autumn, filling it with that anticipatory sense of love awakening. Beautiful and lifting!

This is amazing... I love Autumn so much, like it's now here in the Netherlands.
"The green leaves swiftly fly
To mother Earth
In golden hearts to spy
Dreams of rebirth"
Beautiful write!!! :)

[Scytheriax]

I loved this poem.
Wonderfully written and I loved the diction and emotion of the piece.