DINE WITH MY DEMONS

Come let me take you to a place

Somewhere that you wonder where?

As I  say this I already lost my mind

You say iam blind inside

 

Nothing seems to work my fight

Yeah iam loosing my sight

I see your legs are hurt

Don’t worry we are close

 

Here we go this is the place

The place where you

Dine with my demons

Deep inside

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Well said and expressed, how we all have our demons. And like you said " dine with my demons. Deep inside". As you just can't get away from them ever. You try to shut them out. But now and again they come to the surface.

[Sreenath]

Thank you for your time...

[Jade]

Wow! really deep but so well written.

[Sreenath]

Thank you for your time. Spending to read this out...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

beautiful......
the end is awesome....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this too, not too keen on iam much, but I am old fashioned when it come to grammar.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the thoughts and the ending.
"Here we go this is the place
The place where you
Dine with my demons
Deep inside"
I liked the above lines a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote