A Poem by YOU

They say everyone's different. That may be true, but there are things similar in all of us.

I am me.

I live.

I love.

I have a purpose, even if I haven't found it yet.

I fail sometimes.

I get scared sometimes.

I have hopes and dreams.

I need to be loved.

I need basic food, water, and shelter.

I'd like to have fun.

I deserve to be treated fairly.

I have my own personality.

I want to be respected.

I want to do something good with my life.

I have talent.

I care about something.

I dream.

I am me.

I am you

Reviews

[Sabrina]

I agree with you. Even though everyone says that we are different we all are alike in many ways. Though you are yourself you are the same as others. People don't seem to realize this. This poem seems that it could be a speech to give young peoples that want to make a different because it gives me hope to read this, to hear it when I read it out loud. It also seems to have a message that nobody is perfect. I love how you wrote it in a rainbow. I love the last two lines. They reach out to me and really put a great finish on the end. Lovely poem. Keep writing what you write, you do great at it.

[Alex Cook]

Very nice. I am sure all would like this.

[~]

I like the colorful format, as if we are all colors of one big shiny spectrum of hope. :D

[613]

The last three words, "I am you" are my favorite. Mostly because of all the pretty colors. Great job!

- Brittney

[@juliza]

So true! We are the same in a lot of ways. Good write!
*nice touch with the colors btw ;p

[nightshade]

i love how positive you are and how inspired you are and of course i love all the colours you used to really give this poem a bit of your own personality