time heals pain

poem i wrote that has no story behind, just words in my head that i had to put together to make it sound nice:)

there i was acting like nothing was wrong
with a million thoughts running through my mind
and talking to you all night long
the feeling most people name it undefined

my mind is going to explode
why does this happen to me?
always walking through the cold empty road
It's an image i always see in thee

can't risk losing a friendship like ours
making it all a fuss
and make us live behind bars
of sadness and regret within us


but its something i must control
  i'll be the negative and you be the positive of my magnetic pole

Reviews

[Ma. Catalina P. Yanuari..]

" i'll be the negative and you be the positive of my magnetic pole" love this line.. don't know where you pulling it from .. that's call talent..its either your born with it or not...keep on writing....

[Acer]

my mind is going to explode
why does this happen to me?
always walking through the cold empty road
It's an image i always see in thee......

from my point of view, it's truly a beautiful phrase. I loved these lines, & great job.

[Shoug]

Thank you so much, it means alot! :)

[Acer]

My pleasure :-'')