Good Day VS Bad Day

Good Day VS Bad Day

On my bad days my hair turns black, blacker than the devils heart.

My eyes become the same darkness, no one can see into them.

Not even Jess, my love.

He can tell just when to leave me alone and when he should talk to me.

I have that look that scares people enough that they are to afraid of talking to me.

This is how an angel cries, because really i'm a sweet angel from above.

People know that I can be a perfect little angel.

On my great days I am like an angel that has fallen from Heaven that you would like to meet.

Who wouldn't? If you saw me, you would fall to your knees.

My hair is straight blonde, but im not stupid, just because I'm blonde.

My hair has the color that convinces you I'm your guardian angel.

Wouldn't you want me with you 24/7

Why go to heaven to see angels when I'm right here in front of you?

My heart has so much kindness that it defeats the devil and all the bad people out there.

If you look close enough to my eyes, you will see that they look like broken up shards of crystals.

When I cry these angel eyes of mine turn deep blue, so sad.

Make me feel better with a hug please.

And then I will become your angel FOREVER <3

I'm more of an angel than a devil, everyone knows that.

Reviews

[eatmills]

Nice write. I like your self awareness.
Try this:
On my great days I am like an angel that has fallen from Heaven that you would like to meet. Angels can't fall from earth not in the context you write of.
"...convences you I'm your..." Wrong word spell check has failed you convinces is the word your looking for.

Glad I dropped by.

[jennifer little]

nice work well done on this

[Eagle Cruagh]

((Angel)) OK Angel , there is
your hug.
This is a cute poem, well written,
perfect picture of a little angel .
----John

[shultzfeather]

Is your mother poetic justice, enjoyed the poem