His Mirrored Image

His Mirrored Image

A Poem by Shondell
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This is about realizing who it is that you are trying to be with.

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I wanted to be his woman so bad.

He seemed to be so intelligent and caring.

Something told me to watch him more closely.

When I opened my eyes his puzzle started to match up.

I started to listen more to his words and record everything in my memory.

When I played his words back I would catch the lies he told.

He could make everyone seem like he was such a good fun guy.

When in reality he wasn't worth the ground he walked on.

I was crazy to believe that he would give up all the other girls for me.

He said they were just "friends".

He started to see less of me.

His "friends" always had something going on for him to be at.

His kiss, his smile...

Nothing could make me happy knowing that he was a fake.

If he was fake then his interest in me was fake.

Now I feel like such a fool to get hurt once again.

To put my feelings on the line for a guy who doesn't even know who he is.

I feel sorry for him because he doesn't believe that he has done anyone wrong.

After me I am sure that he will continue on.

© 2008 Shondell


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Wow! This is packed with emotion.
Yes it is sooo sad when that legacy of lies carries on.
Nicely done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


this poem is so true for most guys. And I am glad you spoke the truth becuase some girls go on belieing these guys actually care about them. they are blind. Very good poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


this is nice. I like it. you showed the real intentions of this guy, he was really a fake, and I don't blame you girlfriend for not getting involved with him especially when he doesn't know who he is. this is a great poem. keep up the good writings. can you really believe people go on in this world thinking that they haven't hurted anyone, you right I feel sorry for them to.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Shondell
Shondell

Williamsburg, VA



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