beautiful boys

racism is so last century

goodbye all you summer days

left to run and roam

goodbye all you beautiful men

the ones i never brought home

 

goodbye to all the brothers

and all the irish men

goodbye to the sexi-mexi's

and even jackie chan

 

good dae to the australians

and bonjuor to all the french

goodbye to all the german hunks

and to the lesbian twins

 

i say goodbye from the botom of my heart

in hopes we meet again

racism will never live

as long as we're all "friends"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

ooooooo...
I really like this poem. It's real awesome. Good work:D

[Al]

Oh gosh! Your amazing! Deep Random burst of creavitiy. You don't mind if I review a few more of your poems? Do you? I think theyre amazing.

[Ananke]

Sigh... I wish I'd brought more of them home.
This is such a quirky little piece and I love the "racism is so last century." I like this piece and will be thinking on it after its read, which is a great poem to me. A lot to a little poem! Thanks!

[Pauline Marie Daley]

Very cute. I love how you write the humor and then down at the last two lines, you hit us with what its all really about. Won't it be nice when we are all friends? Very nice. Welcome to writers cafe! :-)

[Gandré]

this was delicious: I loved "goodbye all you beautiful men

the ones i never brought home" -----------wow. I really loved the wit!


I adored this sweet witty profane poem, resolving itself into something quite simple and brilliant. favorite! (also thanks sweetie for taking time and read my new poem Substance. much love, lara gandr�

[Chad Halle]

ha! i enjoyed this sweet little tune (could imagine it being a song similar to an old joni mitchell track or something like that- has the tongue-in-cheek like humor). makes me chuckle. thumbs up to you

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A nice write, good poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Pointblank]

Short sweet and to the point. I like it very much.