i once loved a girl

          i once loved a girl

 

i once loved a girl

who would never love me

i once loved a girl

who saw differently than i see

 

she was beautiful and smart

clever and proud

she loved sweet things

and went with the crowd

 

and i just a girl

in love with a girl

could not, for the life of me

find a cure

 

so i waited in silence, as she walked by

i waited in silence, wanting to cry

 

but one day that girl

found a guy

they're happy together

so why not i?

 

i once loved a girl who would never love me

i once loved a girl, but we were never to be

 

Reviews

[Leo Gems]

I have read many, many poems on lost loves.. This one was very well written, I truly enjoyed the way this allows the reader to feel along with the writer.

Great ink!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Good poem. Feelings well expressed. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[alyssa]

Its sooo sad and i'm sorry... good write!

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[Spat Queen]

This truly defines love in all it's bittersweetness.