break up

This piece explains the feeling i experienced through a brake up please leave a comment good bad or evem if its just show you took time to read this thank you

This lust is a mist that I can not dismiss
its rolling in will i'm hanging on a limb

It starts at my feet as my heart skips a beat
so what can I do but get in one last dieing plead
please don't take me

for if I could I would
just turn and leave

but the ways of past just went by so fast
I didnt bother to ask
Why we couldnt last

I didn't stand a chance so how could i see
what was happening to me

all I can imagine
is something more dangerous then a dragon

Its the love
we once hugged
We once kissed
now its something only I seem to miss

but how was it dismissed
No im not pissed
I just wish i was missed

because the feeling struck me with the weight of a bus
and only I seem to care
so I Seat here stair
At the glare thats been casted on me

You once seemed to be
the only thing that made me happy

But to tell you this would be hell
So instead i dwell
In the cell
As i YELL

I'm supposed to be some strong piece of meat
that no one dears to even try to eat
because I can't and won't be beat
but I feel as if I brought my own defeat

for now I see who you want to be
and sadly i no longer see me

though this is a shame
Im just a piece in this heart less game
With nothing to gain
But pain

remember this is me
im still hang on a limb so before this ends
Let me show you what lays within

Down inside i hide
A heart shaped box what lays inside?
is nothing but my demise
its the only thing I truly see in my eyes

its you the person I used to call my boo
the one I talked to every afternoon
The one who left so soon

in these eyes that oh so rarely cry
you need to know you brought tears to my eyes
not once or twice
but several different times

Author's Note

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[The Black Warrior]

But to tell you this would be hell
So instead i dwell
In the cell
As i YELL

I'm supposed to be some strong piece of meat
that no one dears to even try to eat
because I can't and won't be beat
but I feel as if I brought my own defeat

for now I see who you want to be
and sadly i no longer see me

These are my favorite stanza...

I like the emotion and the passion in this poem/ the pain and the sadness ... it is truly sad and heart breaking...

Well done :D

[shocker]

Glade you like it thanks it means alot

[The Black Warrior]

You're very welcome :D