The way love is

Small peice on how i explained what love is i have since came a lomg way from this but i still find it all true please leave a comment below thank you for reading

Heart ablazed
tucked away for days
the ways to play
if not caged its a shame
its a game
with nothing to gain
but pain
when we claim
to aim
but blame
others for are misery
it comes in and puts us on are knees
where we find the key
to flee to our safety
a safe heavan
As are love begins to trickle
Into a drizzle
we become brittle
as we find the stairs that glare
we stare
not wanting to leave
but so filled with glee
we leap not seeing
its so steep
we are in to deep
its cheap
that we ended are lives this way
trying to get away
as we near the end
it starts over again

Author's Note

Grammar is a issue with me XD ...Please leave a comment

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Hm, now that I read this...this is just the way love is.
"We leap without seeing", but never know what we're really getting into but hope for the best.
We always expect a happy ending, but it rarely turns out that way. It always sucks to break it off with someone and start over new, but the most important thing about love is to be with someone who truly respects and appreciates you for WHO YOU ARE, not just by how you look or how you can satisfy them.

[The Black Warrior]

This is very beautiful indeed. Nicely done :D

[shocker]

Thanks so much glade to hear your review

[The Black Warrior]

You are very welcome :D

[Cool Girl]

Beautiful! I love the emotion in this piece. Work on your grammar a bit, and I think you'll be a very great poet! You can look at some of my poems if you want any ideas for anything. You can send me a message if you ever need suggestions, help, or just want to talk. Maybe we could write a poem together one day:)

[shocker]

Thanks you so mucb

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome! Please accept my friend request:)

[shocker]

I did i think but ill cheack again

[lovergirl]

this is for sure going to be in my library as Favorite :) i really liked it and especially the rhiming well done

[shocker]

Thanks and for some when i write i alwas make them ryme to me it makes it flow and sound better but i never see people fallow this same style so idk what to call it XD anyways thanks so much for

[lovergirl]

it's free styling hhh and me too i love to use it in my poems ;) and you're very welcome

[Kayleen]

This is realy good! you might want to post it in a format that is a little easier to read
Heart ablazed
tucked away for days
the ways to play
if not caged its a shame
its a game
Nothing to gain but pain
etc..

[shocker]

Ya I see what you mean as explained down below formatted do typed on phone on the go thanks though and I'll fix it ASAP I agree it will look and flow better

[vaishnavi]

this is written really nice but you have to make some changes like, its like a paragraph instead you can reconstruct it in line by line, one below the other, hope you understood what i mean to say so it will be more attractive you should enter punctuation marks too and rhyming words are well chosen keep it up

by the way its really sweetest poem :)
regards V

[shocker]

I think I do I write this down as I go always on the move at work so most just get typed on my phone and when I first wrote them it never came to me to set it up that way

[vaishnavi]

oh okay
well you can rewrite in ur free time at home
or as you wish
your writings are amazing... i keep on reading as i get time

[shocker]

Thank you and I will

[vaishnavi]

your welcome
by the way Kayleen has gave the example

Heart ablazed
tucked away for days
the ways to play
if not caged its a shame
its a game
Nothing to gain but pain
etc..

[vaishnavi]

your welcome :D