This place

This piece expresses the way i built up my barrier to shield out others/emotions/problems/family iv come along since writing this reflection on it often please leave a comment below

I got this place I choice to resign
It not a place built off a design
but a place made throughout time.
made as i decline
iv become confine
made when I'm sublime
not in my prime
I feel assigned
to build these walls
That stand tall
l towering over all
built not to fall.
Still they seem to leak
although not weak
its higher towards the peak
I seek
but these walls have become bleak.
As I stand astounded
I became bounded
To say the least I'm grounded
not meant to fly
i sigh
starring up at the sky
so I ask myself "oh why do I try"...
I begin my retreat
feeling beat
to this sanctuary
that's desultory
isn't necessarily
some legendary
secondary place.
Where i hide
is still founded inside those walls
that are just another fence.
another a line of defense
build from suspense
although it can commence
and form a offense
it usually stands still Intel my wall comes crumbling down

Author's Note

Grammar will be bad typed up on my phones on the spot and isn't complete

Reviews

[ashleymarie]

I really enjoyed this! In my opinion it was a great read!

[The Black Warrior]

To say the least I'm grounded
not meant to fly
i sigh
starring up at the sky
so I ask myself "oh why do I try"...

oh! don't we all feel that way some times???

I like it... I like the imagery is very vivid!!

[shocker]

Any comment of how you feel about would be nice or just a hey someone else has read this I'm new and would appreciate it a lot thanks