Lost

I think I'll never be free,

I'm lost within me.

This mad world,

Breaks my mind.

I can't think,

I just cry.

Cruel world,

Worthless soul,

I can't take it any more.

All the despair,

All the sadness,

I felt beyond void.

All in me is madness.

Reviews

[Titilayo Sarah Eguridu]

The pain is palpable.
The anguish and hopelessness may be justified…
Take a deep breathe
Take a step back and think of one thing you’re thankful for.
It’s not all bad…there is always a rainbow at the end of the pain.
Chin up Daniela…this too shall pass!

[An owl on the moon]

What a painful, dark lostness... falling into yourself in these shadows where there is no escape... this vast world within you... It is a madness I know all too well, and you voice it perfectly, Daniela.

[Daniela Leça]

Thank you! :)

[Misery]

Your madness is a mirror of my own, hearts of glass and souls of stone.
Keep sharing your true inspirations, dear poet. They are sorrow-filled music to my spirit.

[Daniela Leça]

Thank you very much!!

[Misery]

You are truly welcome.

[Jamestown]

Been down this frustrating road, hang in there! I have a piece that is uplifting
called Emotions you may enjoy, this is a well written piece, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Daniela Leça]

Thank you for the kind words! :)