New Life.

New Life.

A Poem by Emma. :)

 

A boxy room in antique shades,
Greets my anxious gaze,
Warmed by the beaming smile of an unknown figure,
A sense of misfitted fortune,
Fills this tiny structure,
A feeling likely to remain?
Primary,
Secondary,
Again and again,
I will overcome,
All it takes it a backbone,
For now small,
Yet stronger than stone

© 2008 Emma. :)


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this IS incredible, you have great diction. ur a great writer, keep on writing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


this is frankly incredible......
your way with words in this is masterful.
beautiful,full of suspense and brlliant style!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I was confused to the meaning of this originally, but now I understand.
It's interesting.
In a sense, I see where you're coming from with, "Yet stronger than stone" but shouldn't he/she be delicate rather than anything?

Either way, enjoyable with a really good start, especially the first two lines. Interesting.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Emma. :)
Emma. :)

Cumbria, United Kingdom



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Helloooo.. :) I'm Emma. I'm 15 and I live in Whitehaven, Cumbria. I do most of my writing when I�m inspired/bored/have strange thoughts running through my mind. It�s often su.. more..

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