The Point of No Return

One day she will appear...

he said

...to take me away

away from all the undead

away from all of the unseen,

away from this excruciating pain

that I hold inside of me.

One day she will realize,

that all he ever wanted was

a bit of enlightenment,

a bit of encouragement

to keep on overcoming all of these

dreadful days ahead.

One day she will return,

but not to take him away

away from the unknown,

away from this horrow show.

Truth be told

she never was away,

the only thing he had to do

was turn around,

and there she was all along

walking forward along with him

not looking back to that point of no return...

Reviews

[Melanie Nicole]

Thisis great. amazing work.

And I LOVE phantom of the Opera, by the way. I've seen it a million times. :)

[Magdelena]

Ahhh 'Phantom of the opera"! Love it!!! The piece so fitted the song, 'Turn around'. The opera, saw it many times. Have it all on video too!
You did a fantastic piece on this and I dd feel his pain, love, desire, all for her, his one and only who could save only him.. For you are right. She was there always.. All he had to do was see her, as she saw him....


Mag xx

[Pam]

Love it. I can picture it all! I agree with Rya, I wished it were longer too.

[Tate Morgan]

I like the story To be fair I must say i had trouble attaching to the subject you speak of because I wasnt introduced to her in the piece If i had been i would have been able to attach my mind to her

[Rya May]

Nice. Great message. Nice flow. I wish i twas longer. It feels like there's more to tell. But you did end it nicely :)
btw thanks for the review
rm